The concept that isn't, I think, fully realized in this short piece, is beyond fantastic. Black hole heart fascinates me, intrigues me on the level of semantics, linguistics and the spiritual alike. The imagery of a great universe revolving round a black hole in the middle snapped in but the concept is so grand I'm really surprised you limited the piece to a few lines. I mean black hole heart is so deep and metaphorical. Apart from the cosmic, I can easily envisage a tyrant artist who draws men like flies to honey only to crush them with his wit or, pardon my blatant sexism, one of them Lolita nymphets, those rusalkas that draw you in with the gravity of their charms only to shatter your heart and atomic structure into pieces. This piece gets an A++ for the mystic phrase itself though really, I would like to see this elaborated in some of your future work, E.B. But, alas, the artistic soul has a mind of its own, as it were. Everything most come spontanously and without enforcement or bondage. On the other hand, Communist Russia spawned a plethora of literary geniuses, most of them internationally famed. Guess it's like one of the trygonometric functions, the output value is the same with the lowest and the highest possible argument on the scale of 0-360. Or like in evolution but ah, this is going nowhere I'm afraid.
The concept that isn't, I think, fully realized in this short piece, is beyond fantastic. Black hole heart fascinates me, intrigues me on the level of semantics, linguistics and the spiritual alike. The imagery of a great universe revolving round a black hole in the middle snapped in but the concept is so grand I'm really surprised you limited the piece to a few lines. I mean black hole heart is so deep and metaphorical. Apart from the cosmic, I can easily envisage a tyrant artist who draws men like flies to honey only to crush them with his wit or, pardon my blatant sexism, one of them Lolita nymphets, those rusalkas that draw you in with the gravity of their charms only to shatter your heart and atomic structure into pieces. This piece gets an A++ for the mystic phrase itself though really, I would like to see this elaborated in some of your future work, E.B. But, alas, the artistic soul has a mind of its own, as it were. Everything most come spontanously and without enforcement or bondage. On the other hand, Communist Russia spawned a plethora of literary geniuses, most of them internationally famed. Guess it's like one of the trygonometric functions, the output value is the same with the lowest and the highest possible argument on the scale of 0-360. Or like in evolution but ah, this is going nowhere I'm afraid.
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